求一篇职位应聘的英文翻译，内容如下
各位考官，下午好，我叫XXX，今年23岁，毕业于XXX大学管理学院公共事业管理专业。很高兴能够站在这里应聘贵公司的这一职位，也很感谢贵公司能给我这个机会让我能够展示自己，让自己有一个实现自己价值的机会。如果这次我能应聘成功，我将会努力工作，不断的去学习去进步，不会让各位领导失望，在自己的岗位上完美的实现自己的价值。谢谢！
最佳答案：
Good afternoon everyone. My name is xxx, 23 years old.I have graduated from Management School of xxx University. My major was Public Enterprises Management.I am glad to be here for your company's position. I am appreciate you give me this chance to show my skills and value. If I succeed, I will work hard and keep developing myself to achieve the best for this position.Thank you!
翻译有所改动。怎么说呢，觉得你要讲的内容太书面了，翻译出来不太口语化。
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Good afternoon, everyone examiners, my name is XXX, 23 years old, graduated from XXX university institute of management of the specialty of public enterprises management. Glad to be here for your company's position, also appreciate your company can give me the chance to let I can show oneself, let oneself have a chance of their own value. If I can apply for success, I will work hard to study and progress, and won't let you down in their own positions, oneself value realizes the perfect. Thank you!
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